He wooed her with his warm embrace;
She welcomed him, she shimmered and shone;
I saw their waltz of golden grace;
I saw their courtship at dawn.
His cloudburst kisses, her flirtation;
Henry showered his want on June;
I saw their salsa of sultry seduction;
I saw their passion at noon.
In her he spawned waves of elation-
Her bosom swelled; how he was brisk!
I saw their tango of tumultous titillation;
I saw their raw lust at dusk.
He fondled her in a foggy blur;
She sparkled with tranquil delight;
I saw their love, I saw their care;
I saw their romance at night.
P.S. 'She' is the Hudson river, 'He' is a summer day's weather in Jersey (sunny at dawn, rainy at noon, windy at dusk and foggy at night).
21 comments:
Very nice and crisp ... I would have loved more, if it is a bit lengthy ..
@Naresh - thank u :-) there's tons of inspiration for romance; there'll be longer ones soon.
i loved this post. i loved the way the post script took my imagination from the pristine feelings of bliss and naughtiness, right into river hudson!!
Excellent. keep writing!!!
@Shantan - lol thanks! We enjoy rollercoasters ;-)
very nice post........
booooooooo
@Rajesh - thanks buddy!
@Captain - Thanks for reading but ?????????
champesav poo !!
@Hani - thanks ra :-)
Beautiful!
BrillianT!..
but as always, could this soul rest without posting an argument (arguable)?
She duped him with a long long pause;
He never picked up the leads;
I saw her fangs, I saw her claws;
I saw her dirty deeds.
P.S. I am not quite sure who "He", "She" and "I" are..
@Ling - thank u :-)
@Nair - 'He' would be you, 'She would be CH3CH2OH, 'I' would be you the morning after :D
lavs, I know u got inspired by my poetry.... lolll
@Ravi - thanks man! could there've been another?
Possible. Very much possible. Guess what? that could very well be the truth!
@Nair - Guess what!? 'Him' under 'her' influence is an open book :P
Open book is good. You cant judge it by its cover. :P
nice lavi
i love the way it flows , the intro the kiss, his desire and the blur, even the dance routines.
loved it
@Sandy - thank u :-)
the music in it is audible...and if you are quiet enough in your head.. without unnecessary languor, you might even hear their rushing breaths against the winds blowing rhythm...
masterpiece
@Ram - the music drowns out the white noise languor effortlessly :-) thank you!
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